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equeen
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Hey there, I am new to YWN and find the coffee room forum very entertaining and enlightening. I will post a poem my friend composed and emailed me on erev yom kippur. Although it has a negative connotation I found it to be a bit disturbing yet the raw truth . I would love your input and comments on them….here goes!

In the hopes to appease God

We harbor belligerence

In an attempt to impress God

We abide to rules of ignorance

In the hopes to be loved by God

We reward contentious hate

In an attempt to conquer God

We continue to infiltrate

In the hopes to inspire God

We condone madness

In an attempt to prevail upon God

We perpetuate sadness

In the hopes to persuade God

We pardon immorality

In an attempt to understand God

We excuse brutality

In the hopes to anoint God

We have resigned to play this game

In an attempt to qualify for God

We crowned “the Lie” what a shame!

May all of Klal Yisroel do a reality check, cometh the new year!

A Gmar chasima Tova , and a gut gebentcht yur!